Can anyone critisise my website?

[G]

I'm not sure if it's allowed but i'm looking for some constructive critisism for my website that i've recently set up.
I'm new to business and bought a template design for my cart and I will get a custom website design when I can afford it. I'm trying to increase my sell through rate as it seems so many people come to my site but not many people actually buy. I'm not sure what ratio is good but i'm sure i'm not doing so well!

If it is allowed i'll post my link could someone let me know? Or general pointers of getting people to buy rather than click and then leave?

Thanks

[pcbob]

Welcome G

You are permitted to add your site to the showcase section. please feel free to do so.
Please remember the comments returned are constuctive and not against you.

Hopefully we can get you on a better smoother road to success

Bob

[G]

Hi,
Thank you I looked around and didn't see that secion! I need better glasses! But thank you for pointing me in the right direction.